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    Mother's Breath

    Inhale Wisdom.
    Exhale Freedom

    Unseen,
    I surround you always.
    I am there for every babe's first cry

    Hidden in each peal of laughter
    or wailing lament,
    and every life's last sigh



    I stir
    in any song ever sung
    I whisper
    through the flight of birds
    I rage
    through storms far flung
    I am
    the very thought
    and action of your words
    I whistle
    through every season
    I cut
    through miscommunication
    with reason
    I rest
    in countless rusted wrecks
    I blow
    inspiration gently your way
    I breeze
    around the world with varying affect
    I dance
    within the ocean's salty spray

    I

    feed fire

    split stone

    bind water

    The sky is my only limit!

    Inhale Spirituality
    Exhale Change




    Each singing poem is inspired by a Teacher found in Nature. I'm feeling rather uncertain about this new one as it is so very different. Can you guess who is singing? All feedback welcome!

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    Re: Mother's Breath

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    Air. I thought 'wind' at first, but decided I needed to be less specific.

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    Re: Mother's Breath

    Quote Originally Posted by Marilyn/Absentminded View Post
    Air. I thought 'wind' at first, but decided I needed to be less specific.
    <nodnod> I love the idea of doing these for the elements as well as for animals, plants, etc.

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    Re: Mother's Breath

    Quote Originally Posted by Marilyn/Absentminded View Post
    Air. I thought 'wind' at first, but decided I needed to be less specific.

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    Exactly so! I thought about focusing on the Winds, but felt that needed to be a seperate piece, more focused. Air is the elemental Teacher singing here )

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    Re: Mother's Breath

    Quote Originally Posted by SunflowerP View Post
    <nodnod> I love the idea of doing these for the elements as well as for animals, plants, etc.

    Sunflower
    So glad you are enjoying these new and/or revised pieces! I love stretching my mind out to capture the song of a new and unusual Teacher. Animals are usually the first thing people think of in this way, then Plants... but there are so many more out there! Stones, stars, elements... there are Teachers everywhere we look )

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